STEP 2 – DRAFTING

1.Main point



               What is the meaning of friend? Friend is a person who you know well and who you like a lot but he or she usually not a member of your family. As we all know everyone who live in this world have friends but not everyone can have a real friend who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.

               I have a friend named Nana. She is someone that I know since I was 13. She is my closed friend. We study at the same school and collage until now. I think almost everyday we met, before and after school. Eventhought we study at the same collage, we still not meet each other everyday because we are in the different class. So after collage, if I have free time, I will meet Nana first before go back to home.

               I would say Nana is my real bestfriend because I still remember the incident that happened on myself when I need to stay up at school until late night. The incident happened when I was on my way to go back home and suddenly my car was broke down because it was out of fuel next down to the hunt. On that time Nana is the only person who come and help me when I was in scared and worried about myself.

               By this incident, I will say that it is very important to have a friend even only one friend especially a friend who always be there for you when you needed. Appreciate our friends while they are by your side because when we have friend we can laught a little harder, cry a little less and smile a lot more.

 

 

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  1. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2022 at 6:15 AM

    Flawed narrative essay; reflecting and demonstrating a very poor writing skills and understanding on the meaning of the quote. (C6)

    Very poor essay and weblog with lack of technical understanding. (C6)

    Essay & weblog have poor creativity and original thought. Craftmanship and design are very weak, stereotypical or copied. (P7)

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2022 at 6:19 AM

    The weblog contain most of the necessary navigational tools and buttons. Users can progress smoothly through the site in a logical path to find information. (LO6)

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2022 at 6:20 AM

    The piece of work exhibits a satisfactory critical & creative thinking skills and the process of writing is followed moderately.

    Demonstrates a satisfactory ability to analyse information from a few sources; transformed them into a an average content in the weblog. (KKG2)

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2022 at 6:32 AM

    C & C = 5/10
    CCTS = 6.7/10
    ICT = 8/10
    TOT = 19.7

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    1. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2022 at 7:09 AM

      CHANGE TO:

      C & C = 4.5/10
      CCTS = 6.5/10
      ICT = 7.8/10

      TOT = 18.8/30

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