STEP 4 : PROOFREADING

 

What is the meaning (change to epitome) of friend? Friend is a person who know you very well and the one who you like a lot ( change to whom you treasure) even though he or she usually not a member of your family. As we all know everyone who live in this world have friends but not everyone could be able to have a true friend who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.

               I have a friend named Nana. She is someone that I knew since I was 13. She is my close friend. We study at the same school and college until now. I think we met almost everyday, before and after school. Even though we study (change to are currently studying in)  the same collage, we still not meet each other everyday because we are in the different class. So after collage (change to class hour) , if I have free time I will meet Nana first before going back home.

               I would say Nana is my real bestfriend because I could still remember the incident that happened to myself when I need to stay up at (change to burn the midnight oil) at school until late night. The incident happened when I was on my way to go back home and suddenly my car was broke down because it was out of fuel next down to the hunt. On that time Nana is the only person who came and helped  me when I was in scared and worried about myself.

               By (change to From) this incident, I will say that it is very important to have a friend even only one (change to a) friend especially the one who always be there for you when you needed. Appreciate our friends while they are by your (change to our) side because when we have friend we can laugh a little harder, cry a little less and smile a lot more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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